Friday, May 15, 2009

Tuesday, I mean Friday Teaser

Elana is having a contest over on her blog. Submit 250 words of dialogue and the winner gets a query critique or a first chapter critique. This is my entry. It's from my novel, so I thought I'd post it here as a teaser. I tweaked it a little to fit the maximum word count, but I think all the pertinent info is still there.

For a laugh, check out Becca's entry here. It's hilarious!


Removed. Check back for other teasers. :)


  1. I love this! Lots of great info just through the dialogue. Woo hoo!

  2. Excellent use of dialog! Woo hoo!

  3. Wow, two woo hoos! Woo hoo! Thanks, ladies!

  4. Very nice dialogue here. I'm quite envious. I'm also intrigued to read on. Nice job!